Profile Review Please

Thank you for the candid feedback GGMM! I appreciate the time you took to respond.

I will be updating my profile over the next week or so.

You have had a profile since 2023. Just wanting feedback now?

As usual, I think GGMM nailed it. Rather than comment on what's there, if you update your profile I'll try to take a look and comment on that.

Hi. Welcome. Apologies in advance for the bluntness. It's kindly meant, but that doesn't mean it can't be challenging to hear criticism.

So, first, if your aim is to attract women, unless you're climbing a vertical cliff, don't post photos where you aren't smiling. Good humor is the single most important signal you can send.

Second, if you're looking almost exclusively for single women, online is not going to be very productive. It's mostly couples and single men on sites like SLS. Single women are not nearly so rare in clubs that allow single men.

Third, you've had this account for two years. That means your profile either needs an explanation or you need to remove all indications that you think of yourself as new.

As far as your profile specifics, your tagline is a C-. It's descriptive but is unlikely to entice anyone to open your profile. Try for clever if you can. And consider adjusting your age range, with your age closer to the middle. It won't deter a younger woman than specified and it will sit better with your female contemporaries.

You have some typos that spellcheck probably won't catch, so you'll have to read out loud to find the corrections.

Your text is mostly fine, but your Description is kind of a boner killer after the mention of the Princess Bride. Of course you're clean. You're an adult with access to bathing, after all. Also, descriptions of how you sex isn't going to entice anyone. Instead of what you have, give a better sense of who you are as a person. LIke, the vanilla you. In a lifestyle that seems to be about sex, the real key to making connections is to be an interesting person who is genuinely interested in others. So, be interesting.

In any case, your biggest hurdle is being so openly dismissive of MFM, as if you will if you have to, but. That would turn off couples and single women.

Anyway, best of luck.

New to the lifestyle and looking for feedback on my profile. I am a single male. Thank you.