Profile Review please

Newbies2 - It is better to start a new post so it's clearer who the advice given is meant for.

Newbies, you should start your own separate thread for profile advice, it's polite and less confusing for all.

While you have face photos of her, there are none of him. While neither of you have to show your face when posting an initial profile, they should be available to share in your private photos, which you have none. If you want to attract another woman, she's going to want to know what he looks like too.

I don't really relate well to your age group and will probably sound like the old guy yelling "get off my lawn" but I'm going to throw my two cents in. ;-)

Why are y'all taking individual mirror selfies? Take pictures of each other - I really don't want to see your phone and you'll avoid the odd angles that cause distortion. And what's with the color overlaying some of the photos? I have a hard enough time viewing profile photos on a 15" laptop - I can't imagine what they look like on a smaller screen.

If you are really looking for FWB then you need to devote a little more time to the Friends part. You've covered Benefits but your current profile text sounds like you're looking for NSA encounters. What makes y'all unique? What sort of things do you enjoy? Give us a clue! Do you stream Netflix or prefer the big screen, football or soccer, hiking or boating, picnics in the park or white table cloth & fine china? Details about ability to host or distance you'll travel are also helpful to share.

Your profile text is actually better than most - just remember that it's not all about sex and present a more complete description of yourselves.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

You all have done a pretty good job of getting the profile together. Apply what Meyhem has said, especially when it comes to fwb shopping. Having an fwb means you'll be looking for shared interests outside of the bedroom. You all have described your sexual preferences well and your pics do a good job of conveying a bit of your personalities. Without repeating yourselves try and get some information in the profile for people to find like interests. Again, keep in mind that unicorn hunting is typically frustrating and doesn't lead anywhere. Being smokers will also limit the interest many will have, but don't let that frustrate you. Consider at some point meeting couples rather than just the female half. The best unicorn hunting is done at clubs, hotel takeovers, and house parties. If you can use the profile(s) as a point of reference at parties it works better than using it alone and hoping to get a message from a legit lady that isn't a 37 year old guy named Bob who still lives at his mom's house.

The Looking For section is a bit light. Perhaps specify in a general sense what you are looking to do with an SF if/when you find one. For example. FFM, FMF, FF, etc. Also, are there any wish list items you have for a SF (i.e. prefer curvy, thin, shaved, someone that likes X, Y, Z, etc). This is where you talk about who you want, and what you want them for.

Your toggles show equal interest in Watch, Soft, and Full play. Is this really the case? If not, perhaps set those accordingly.

Your profile makes it look like you are all and only about the "sex". You do specify in the Fantasies/Experience section that you're looking for a FWB, so perhaps list some interests other than sex in the Description section so that you can connect on another level. At a minimum, it gives someone some talking points/hooks as well as potential common interests other than just sex.

I thought the pictures were decent and shows you as a sexy and desirable couple.

Just something to note as far as setting expectations, but you are one of many couples and singles looking for a SF. As a group, SFs have the highest demand and are in short supply relative to the # of people looking for them. You should temper your expectations based on that, regardless of how good your profile is. This is especially true because you specify zero interest in couples.

There are couples where the female half is allowed to play alone. Why rule out that possibility?

This probably goes without saying, but you'll be much more productive at LS parties/events than you will online.

This is our first ever profile. F half wrote most of it but we’re completely unsure if its Good or Bad, what else to include or what to remove. We think it looks ok but would love some criticism and feedback.