Profile review please?

Fort Payne, AL, Us

Hi there! Hope you've read other reviews and realize that we're likely to be blunt - we're an opinionated bunch. But we genuinely want to help you create a profile that attracts the type of fun you are looking for.

You've got some great pictures in your public gallery but too many of them are essentially duplicates. Pare it down to the best half dozen or so - and maybe find someone to take a full length photo of the two of you in your Sunday best to round out the gallery.

Your text is going to take a little more work. Not sure what's going on with the short lines in some sections but running it all together makes it very hard to read and that means people won't bother reading. Copy all the text into a word processor on something other than a phone and then start fine-tuning.

In Looking For you might want to add what sort of encounters you prefer - my guess would be on-going, FWB but I've been wrong before. The line about hosting/travel and local/loco would better fit in Add'l Comments. I'd shorten the bit about photos so that you aren't telling people what to do but inviting them to share those "hot" smiling photos with you.

Once you've rearranged and maybe added a bit then separate different thoughts within each section by putting a blank line between paragraphs (you'll need two blank lines between the first two paragraphs in a section for SLS to display one blank line). When you are happy copy each section back to SLS.

You've got a great conversational style that shows a quirky sense of fun - along with your fabulous smiles you should do well.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife