Removing the physical descriptions text will condense things a bit. The pictures negate the need for that text. There are likely opportunities to tighten up the text a bit and maybe consider if you need/want some of it. The idea being that the activities/hobbies are potential talking points. I'm not sure "spending time with kids" or "walking the dogs" would be potential talking points versus bowling, cards, hiking, etc.
Personally, I think some of the extra text does help paint a picture, but you need to balance that out with the thought that your profile may be viewed as overly wordy.

