Profile review please

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. You've been through this particular gantlet before, so you know the drill. And I apologize in advance, because I'm going to make suggestions that would have you tearing up your profile and starting over if you took them.

First, your photos of her aren't good. I understand the whole discretion thing (although I am puzzled about how discreet things need to be if your face is visible), but boobs and butts aren't the way to go. Full body shots, preferably of the two of you fully dressed and doing something interesting, are a better option.. It's fine to blur or crop faces for your public gallery.

Looking For iss fine, but you don't need that comma after "couples" and I'm pretty sure it's a TOS violation to mention your other profile name (no, I have no idea why). In any case, in your profile, I think you should just say you have a singles profile (not a single one).

Description is super clunky. I know it's much, much easier to do it your way, but it's hard to read and doesn't highlight the two of you as a couple. And being a couple is what you're presenting here. Instead, the whole thing should be more like the third paragraph. And don't describe things that can be seen in your public photos or found in your stats, like body type or height.

The last two sentences in Description are misplaced. The first is something that should be recast and stuck into Looking For and the second would have a better home in Additional comments.

Fantasies is good, but your syntax is a little scrambled. I'd suggest putting it through spell check and then reading it out loud.

In Additional comments, I haven't changed my mind about moving to alternate modes of communication. I might be an outlier though and you'll certainly find at least a subsection of people who are fine with it.

Hey everyone I really appreciate all of your feedback on my personal profile SemperFi1974, and we would love to hear from y’all about our couples profile. Thanks in advance.

J & D

P.S. I’m still working on the other profile.