Your location gives you an advantage over many single gentlemen - you can hopefully tap into the many people that believe "what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas" in addition to seeking out locals. ;-)
I'd delete all three of your selfies - they are not doing you any favors. The other two are good.
Your text mostly needs organization - I'd copy it all to a word processor offline and start rearranging. Make sure each sentence is necessary and answers the question implied by the section header. Let your stats and photos describe your physical appearance.
The fact that you've already connected with someone and received a cert is excellent - this is a VERY difficult way to meet people for swinging and usually takes time and patience. Ron&Kathy are right about Who Viewed Me being a distraction - sometimes it's because you're new, you posted in the forums, you were next to the profile they meant to view, etc.
Good luck, have fun and stay safe!
~Phoebert's Wife

