Apparently the last couple of posts scared this person/couple away. They were very mild compared to some of the bluntness that has happened in the past, so looks like the person needs to grow a couple more layers of skin if/before they come back ;-)
It wouldn't hurt for you to read a few of the other profile reviews - many of the same suggestions will apply to your profile.
Some things that caught my attention -
Ditch the "happy to discuss more in person" when talking about fantasies/things to try. That's a bit of a cop out and actually unnecessary in your case - if you move some sentences around you've already mentioned things you've done (played with hot wives, stag/vixen and MFM couples) and want to do (go to clubs).
Pick the best photo that shows off your torso and either delete the rest or move them to a personal or private gallery. Your public gallery should entice others to read your text not wonder if you have any clothes. ;-)
And yeah, this is a swinger site and we're all here for sex - but it's not all about sex. So add a bit about the vanilla you in Description - give us a clue about what makes you a unique individual that we'll want to meet and play with.
Good luck, have fun and stay safe!
~Phoebert's Wife
