Hi. I apologize in advance for being blunt.
Okay, so, first, a few more photos, including a full length clothed one and one that shows off what you mean by long hair. Smile in those too, because yours is great and it's the thing that is most likely to impress women.
In terms of your text, you don't really have a lot of content. Like, there's enough to hint at the person behind the words, but nowhere near enough to give enough of a picture to garner interest. Does that make sense?
I kind of like the way you use words, but can you also be a little more forthright? As in, what are you looking for? I get the MFM/MF thing, but you also have two years younger to 43 years older as your preferred age range and that's interesting enough to warrant a sentence.
In Description, you have a typo to clean up (not the only place), but otherwise it's good. It would be better if you said a little more about who you are. Authenticity is attractive and will help you stand out from the ocean of single guys who give you their dick measurements instead of useful information.
Fantasies is good as far as it goes, but you are on a lifestyle website instead of Bumble and that indicates you might have a richer fantasy life than you're currently indicating. You don't have to be graphic (and, really, you shouldn't), but this is another chance to be authentic and memorable.
Additional comments is fine, but fix the typo. Actually, once you make changes, read the whole thing out loud to make sure it says what you want it to.
Best of luck.
