Assuming you didn't already do this, it is probably good to cut/paste all your profile text changes into something local, like Notepad or something on a laptop. That way, if they somehow get lost, you're not having to remember and retype in all of the changes.
Doesn't look like my last set of changes populated since I still have Discrete instead of Discreet. I'll see if the edits take this time.
Hi. Nice profile overall, but you've got a puzzler in one section: "Ideally, meeting new women with a fun and free personality who are looking for discrete and mutually fulfilling experiences with or without clothes on is my who fit the above catch my attention :) .
Maybe change those last few words. Also, it's "discreet," not "discrete."
I truly appreciate the comments. Public pics are being worked on vs what's already uploaded on private side galleries. Finding the balance between to much or to little written content is the hardest part. I'll take another crack at editing at see where I end up with.
One thing you may want to try to do is change the wording a bit in Looking For. It's a minor thing, but this is where you talk about other people, not you. A lot of your sentances start with either "I, I'm, I'd". If you show that you can focus attention on others here, it makes you appear less likely to be self-centered, which is never a good look.
You also don't really talk about what you want to do with these play partners if/when you find them. That does come out a bit in other sections, but it wouldn't hurt to give some general ideas under Looking For (i.e. 1 on 1, 2 on 2, mfm, etc).
Your Description is mostly a couple of run on sentances. Other than a drink/cigar and chatting, it really doesn't say what your interests/hobbies are. This is a missed opportunity for ice breaking discussion topics, or letting others know that you may have common interests beyond just sex.
Currently, a fair bit of your content in this section can be replaced by a decent picture or two. Once you post pictures, you can remove any of the physical description text, so interests/hobbies can make a good fill-in for this.
I get that this is a sex site, but many people want more than just that. If that's not you, then maybe state that you are mainly looking for NSA sex. It may or may not be implied being that you are married.
It's good that you are up front about being married, but you may want to consider including your wife's profile name. There are undoubtedly guys here that claim to have a hall pass, but really don't. A partner's profile could easily be faked, but having it listed where the Mrs can verify you have a hall pass could mean the difference between meeting someone or not.
I assume you mean "talk to text" errors. ;-)
Text to speech errors don't help with any of this these days :)
Yeah - I have fun with all of those:
their - there - they're
two - too - to
peaked - peeked - piqued
are - our
and several more I can't think of right now!
Well, at least it's not a there and their issue, LOL. I'll fix and thanks!
Sometimes you catch all the regulars when they're busy. ;-)
And sometimes there's just not much to say.
Assuming you put up reasonable photos I can't see much of anything that need changing - except you need to learn the difference between discrete and discreet.
Good luck, have fun ans stay safe!
~Phoebert's Wife
22 views and no comments? Well then, either the profile rocks or its cringy so? :)
I re-rolled my profile with a new, less silly user name. I've been a lifetime member since 2014. This is my SINGLE MALE profile, wife and I have had separate profiles for years due to living apart with extensive travel for work. I am adding new pics so ignore the place holder, what I am looking for is content review.
Thanks!
