Profile Review

wow what a makeover thats awesome

Who the hell are you, and what the hell did you do with the pissed off cowboy?

Well I did it, made a new account/username, just waiting on my old account to be transferred over to this one. Thanks again to everyone who checked me out and made suggestions, you're the best!

You might want to crop whatever photo you use for default so that the little thumbnail shown in forum posts and searches is centered on your face

Thanks for the feedback everyone, you all rock!

Definitely lose the irate portion of your name. Your default pic only shows a part of your head and it's the top. Choose a better pic for your default than that. Leave that pic in your gallery though. You also need to leave out anything that says that you are new. Some couples just really aren't into unboxing a new sm wading through all that plastic, undoing twist ties, etc. Instead say something to the effect or respecting boundaries and your role as an sm. Generally, when sm's talk about their favorite appendage in their profile they exaggerate or are inaccurate. Different ladies like different shapes and sizes. Just let a pic in your private gallery suffice for the description. Over emphasizing oral is often seen as code for a small appendage. You have done a pretty good job over all. Good luck.

Angry and Desperate... what’s not to like? ...You got a sister?

All kidding aside (well, except for the sister part), I’m on the “rethink profile name” side of the fence.

BT

I never pay attention to profile names.

I still think you need to rethink your profile name. Even if desperado means cowboy (it doesn't - it means bandit) do you really think an irate one is going to be appealing to ladies? Your profile is part resume and part advertisement - you want it to entice others to contact you. I'm not interested in meeting anyone irate for something that is supposed to be fun.

If I'd have come across your profile in a search I probably wouldn't ever get to your text because of your profile name. If I read your current profile text without seeing your profile name I'd probably contact you because of how well written it is. Most of us are busy and make fairly quick decisions about who we want to meet. Everything about your profile needs to be appealing.

You should probably add at least one nicely dressed, full body photo to give others an idea of how you might appear at a first meeting. Depending on your area that could be a suit or it could be nice jeans and a polo shirt. Be sure to smile, watch for clutter or visual chaos in the background and avoid selfies.

Your text isn't bad but it's a bit unbalanced - aim for sections of similar length. Description is generally longer but it shouldn't be two or three times the length of other sections. You can eliminate some of the excess in Description by deleting information that shows in pictures (dad body, hair & eye color) and move the bit about traveling/hosting to Additional Info. Looking For could use a bit more specificity - right now it sounds like you'll entertain just about any female (especially with the default age preference of 18-99). The type of encounters you're hoping for also belongs here (one-time encounters, NSA, FWB, on-going).

Mostly you just need some fine-tuning. And a new profile name (I know - broken record).

Have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

lol very true, it's just a dumb nickname I've been using awhile, I'll think of something better

and it's Desperado like a cowboy, as in Irate(mad) Desperado (cowboy)

I'll look at the rest and comment later but to be honest your profile name is a bit off-putting.

Nothing about being irate or desperate is terribly appealing and that's where my thoughts went first.

~Phoebert's Wife

Hi all,

I know its tough to get started here as a single guy, I've been reading as much of the forums as I can and been improving my profile as I can but I still feel like maybe feedback from the actual people I'm aiming it at (single ladies/couples) might do me a world of good. Help!