Hi there. Okay, so, I'm not sure if you've read any other profile reviews. I hope you have, because otherwise it can be an unpleasant surprise to discover just how blunt people can be as they give you advice. It's kindly meant - we really do want you to find what you're looking for - but it can feel really unpleasant.
So, that disclaimer out of the way, start by adjusting your age preference to 25-58, which puts your age in the center, assuming you're actually 41 (SLS does not update birthdays). You won't discourage a single teenager and it'll look better.
Your photos are truly terrible. You have three of one shot and another that looks like it was taken by a convenience store security camera. In each case, your expression is just off putting. You can do better. Go look for Velma's advice on other threads and pay attention to it, because she's right. Watch your expression (please, smile), have others take your photos and pay attention to what's in the background of your photo.
You also really need certs. It sounds like most of your playing must be at clubs, but certs are pretty important for single men.
Taglines are meant to invite people to open your profile. Yours doesn't. In fact, it does the opposite, since it gives as much information as someone would need to decide you were a no. Go for something short, clever if you can, but definitely short. Go ahead and search for profiles a thousand miles from you and see if there's something you could adapt to your needs.
As far as the text, you have a shit ton of errors in spelling, punctuation and word usage. Like, I can see you being way more successful in person than you are on line, just because this is so distractingly bad that it gets in the way of your goals. At the very least, please do all your corrections on a computer or a tablet with spelling and grammar checking. And pretty much rewrite a bunch of it.
Looking For is meant to be about other people and then what you want them for. Like, this is where you talk about not liking NSA (which confuses me, since you're good with friendships, something that doesn't usually come with strings). And by want them for, I don't mean sex. That's a given, so you needn't mention that. But the part about wanting friendships, etc
Description actually has some good bits there, but they're a bit swamped in that run on sentence. Just start with "I love cars and go from there. Try to avoid using "sex" and words that contain "sex."
In Fantasies, you mostly just need different language to say similar things and, again, use punctuation. I'm a little concerned about the fetish thing, because it can leave the wrong impression or sound more serious than it is. There's a difference between having a 24/7 latex fetish and having a fantasy about a particular kind of role play.
Additional comments is good, but stop at "...area of Pennsylvania as well." I mean it's good if you correct the typos and use punctuation.
Anyway, please don't use your phone for this. It's not your friend.
Good luck, gather opinions and then please come back and let us look at the changes you make.
