Profile review

I made a couple changes thanks all

A small grain anyway. :-)

Please leave the BDSM reference right where you have it. Just rearrange the letters correctly. That you have it in Fantasies is appropriate and it doesn't need to also appear elsewhere in your profile. Nor does the cuck thing.

I actually like what you have in Looking For now, but if you're open to women, add "and women" to couples. Leave out 'and not a toy" and the "even" part of going to a nice restaurant.

In Description, leave out "attractive," because your photos can convey that better and drop the no drama thing, because if it's true you'll just live your life without drama without having to point that out.

In Fantasies, it's it's a real turn on, not its, and it's BDSM Dom/sub.

Otherwise you're good. Just add more photos.

Your text is short enough to just cut/paste in some suggestions -

Looking For: I am looking to connect with couples that are open to a new friend and not just a toy. Couples open to MFM and cuck desirable. Would also like someone into Dom/sub that is willing to pass on some knowledge about that and BDSM in general. Also open to single women for fun in and out of the bedroom.

Description: I am an easy-going single guy with a great sense of humor. Confident but not cocky. Very respectful and know how to treat a lady. I enjoy going out to dance, or even a nice outing to a restaurant or a pub. Love the outdoors, camping and going on road trips for the weekend. Playing golf is a real obsession and meeting golf partners would be a bonus.

Fantasies and / or real experiences: I have attended swinger clubs in the past and still do on occasion. I've been in the LS for a while and have made some great friends over the years. I love MFM situations and it's a real turn on for me, also have been involved with a cuckold setup and enjoy that as well. I have this fantasy about the BDSM Dom/sub world out there. I need a little guidance in that regard.

Additional comments and things to do, see, hear or learn about: I could be that friend that you have been looking for.

BTW - I'm no English major so take this with a big grain of salt ;-)

Thanks again for advice I will upload more pics when I get them

It's looking pretty good - but it wasn't in terribly bad shape to begin with.

Most of what's in Looking For is really about you and might be incorporated into Description. You show a high interest level in single ladies but never mention them in Looking For or Fantasies/Experience. And you still have some spacing/punctuation issues.

You need to get a few additional pictures - but even with just the one I'd probably send a message if you were close to us.

Have fun!

Thank you, so much for being open and straight to the point on my profile, I have removed the extra pics and changed the message in my profile. I hope you can review it again and let me know what else needs to be done. Yes my certs were all just given lately even though I met them a couple months ago, my fault because I thought I better give appreciation to my friends that I met at the same time lol.

I was busy earlier so it looks like all my thoughts have been brought up. But I'll repeat the highlights and you can read the other replies again for the details. ;-)

Rearranging some content so it's in an appropriate section, adding a bit more content and then cleaning up the spelling, grammar and punctuation should be all you need to do with your text.

Please delete all selfies and non-smiling pictures - they just aren't appealing. Complete strangers, as well as friends, are usually more than happy to take pictures for you - most will even take several shots to be sure you get a good one! Remember to smile.

Have fun!

~Phoebert's Wife

Hi. I'm going to say mean things about your profile. It might feel uncomfortable. Try to hang with it anyway and do understand that it's kindly meant, with the object being to get you laid.

Okay, so, I love your default photo, but the rest can go. No more selfies, please, and that goes double for half naked selfies. Have others take your photos, preferably of you doing something interesting in interesting places.

Your tagline is telling me how I'm going to,do something. I'm naturally contrary, but I think even nicer people prefer to be invited in rather than told. Maybe "How do you feel about accents?" Whatever you choose, the idea is to interest others and get them to open your profile and say yes to meeting. So, short and clever is best, but short and sincere works too.

On your certs, you actually have too many for less than a month on here. Since one of them is clearly from party hosts rather than a playmate, that one can go.

The biggest problem with your profile is that you have this sexy, interesting, charming default pic and...a boring, pedestrian profile full of typos. It's quite the letdown. Let's see if we can fix that.

So, in Looking For, I'm hoping you have other criteria for your potential playmates other than their willingness to have sex with others. Plus, you show an interest in single women but don't talk about them. Instead of what you have, use complete sentences. I am looking for fun couples and women who are interested in having an FWB. Or whatever actually suits your needs. That means you can eliminate the line in Descriptions about one night stands.

Instead, talk a little bit more about yourself as a person. What do you like to do? Not sexually, just your interests. The idea is to take that person people meet at parties and have some of it show up in your profile.

In Fantasies, that's where you talk about having been in the lifestyle for a few years and having experience with couples, but it's also where you give an brief glimpse of a fantasy or two. Nothing graphic, just another glimpse into who you are and what you like. It's another chance to interest others, you know?

I'm neutral about what is currently in Additional comments. I think you can do better, but what you have is fine.

Finally, you have to use spelling and grammar check. There are so many typos here that it's annoying. Since technology can help, let it.

Good luck. Make some changes and then come back to give us another chance to help.

I don’t think that what you have is bad. It’s the minimum, But you have three Certs so I assume you’re doing something right.

You should clean up your text and make sure that you have periods at the end of your sentences. That would be a dealbreaker for me I would veto you in a heartbeat if I saw grammar and punctuation mistakes like that. You should transfer your text to a word document correct your grammar and punctuation and then transfer it back.

I have a feeling that a lot of your success comes from going to clubs.

I personally would throw away the selfie in the dining room and the picture of you in the towel. I have a friend of yours take a picture of you shirtless at the beach or at a pool and have another friend of yours take a picture in that same dining room.

Smile when you take pictures. That whole not smiling when you take pictures thing came from an OK Cupid study Which was disapproved back in 2010 but for some reason is still being used as Sage advice.

That’s about it for now. I would take those new pictures and then re-post.

Biggest thing is that the Description doesn't give any idea of the things that interest you, besides sex. It sort of reads like, "Let me be your tool". If people are going to engage you in some sort of conversation or look for common interests besides sex, you don't really give them anything to go on.

Aside from that, there are a few typos such as improper use of words like "there" vs "their", missing punctuation and sentence structure. If you cut/paste what you have into MS Word it may pull some of those out for you.

I like seeing a profile pic with a nice big smile. I'm sure others will have more input on your pictures but overall, they looked OK to me,

I would recommend reading through some of the other posts here because a lot of the input is somewhat generic and can help with most profiles.You don't have a lot of content in general.

Would someone please give me some suggestions and feed back on my profile