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I'm always curious what "Like minded people" means...like fuck and then agree on politics, or we all like sex? I'd spell out exactly what you're looking for using more narrative (words) and let the like minded find you. If you're a farmer who likes goats there's gotta be more shepherds on here than you know. The more specific you are the more like minded people will like you and the less others with bother you; For instance: "We're not looking for single men at this time" or "we're new and interested in another couple who are new too and willing to learn with us together"

I also confused about Mr Chicago who "needs stress realised..."I'd set up a separate profile for Mr Chicago and add the shirt and tie pics there.

Hi and welcome. Your profile could use some work - it's pretty pedestrian for a couple that describes themselves as fun, adventuresome and insatiable - but the biggest issue is your photos. If I were to agree to meet you for coffee, it would not surprise me at all if only he showed up, with some sort of excuse for her absence. In other words, the vibe it gives off is that they are not equals in this endeavor and that she is, in fact, an afterthought.

The way to eliminate that poor beginning is to have both of you in equal amounts of clothing. If he gets to wear nice clothes, so does she. And your profile default should not be of him solo; either the two of you (cover both your faces if hers can't be seen for some reason) or of her alone (since the demographic of who is searching is overwhelmingly male).

In terms of profile text, in Looking For, you've used the word "fun" twice without sounding fun. So, start with a complete sentence: "We are looking for couples and single women. We like to have sex, but also..." You might consider putting in additional content as well, although it's not strictly necessary, about the kinds of people you're looking for as well as the categories.

In Description, it's "orgasm," and you can remove the "he loves to please" because it's wishy washy. Now add something about the kinds of things you like to do. What makes you interesting and unique? Is one of you an international spy? Whatever it is, there is a unique combination of traits and interests that makes you unlike any other couple/single and this is the place for that to surface.

In Fantasies, you're no longer a new couple and you've used "fun" again. It's both were in the lifestyle and say something about your experiences there as well as what you want/have done as a couple.

Figure out what you want to put in Additional comments. Do not waste the opportunity to interest people.

So, you have some work ahead of you. I hope you come back and let us see what you've done and review it again. Good luck!

I think you’re kind of in this weird space where I’m not sure who’s running the show .

To face pictures of the mail combined with the body part pictures of the female almost make it look like you’re doing this without her knowledge but you’re nice enough to know you shouldn’t show her face .

I know that this isn’t true but I can see how someone who’s giving you a cursory glance could.

I think you should show both of your faces or hide both of your faces. I also think you should get a nice picture the female half dressed up . Get rid of that weird picture of the females but in the males face that doesn’t make any sense and it’s not attractive.

Our first question - why are all the pics of him g rated and her pics are of all her sex parts? The impression we get is that she is only good for sex. So we'd pass.

Also, there is very little of depth in your profile. You want to have sex. Got it. We all do. But what would we talk about before and after the sex? You like wine? Football? Hiking? Tell us.

And spelling counts. Run a spell check when you're done with your rewrite.

Let us know what you think please...