Hi. Given your age, what you have isn't bad. I have a few minor changes to suggest for now and I hope as you get experience your profile reflects some growth, but otherwise you've done a pretty good job.
Your photos do need to be rethought though. Please ditch the selfies, especially the one in the bathroom. Either have someone else take photos of you, preferably smiling, or use the timer on your phone. If you're deft, you can get away with a selfie stick, but no phones showing in any of your photos.
So, here are my suggestions:
In Looking For, before the sentence you have there already, write about who you're looking for. This section is meant to be centered around them, so do that. You're looking for couples and women, right? So, talk a little about that. Check the profiles of other forum posters if you need ideas. Also, no comma in that sentence that's there now.
Oh, and you might want to up your upper age limit. Feel free to turn down anyone you feel is too old, but you're more likely to be candy for a 50-something woman than one who is 30 and changing your age limit might give you more opportunities.
In Description, get rid of the weird capitalization and really think about whether you want to advertise that you keep to yourself on a site that is all about NOT keeping to oneself. Are you a musician or only sort of a musician? Don't waffle. The rest is good and I'm even letting you keep the emoji here and elsewhere, when I would normally veto it as not fitting the format of a semi-formal document, because on you it's pretty charming.
In Fantasies, please lose the last sentence. It sounds like a lecture and even if it's not meant that way, it will be a point against you. If you have any experience in multi-partner sex though, here's the place to say it.
That's all I have for now. I hope you make some changes and then come back for a review. Good luck.