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Hi and welcome. The single biggest thing is you essentially have zero description. The pictures (even limited ones) plus the stats cover the physical description. If you're unsure of what to put there check out other profiles for ideas. The main thing people are looking for are the things you CAN'T see from the pics and stats.

Many are looking for FWBs, but to be friends with someone you'll probably want to have more in common than just sex. For example, what sorts of things do you do besides sex in your free time, like cards, bowling, golf, camping, etc.. These may be the things that people approach you about to get the ball rolling.

Hi and welcome. I'm going to be quick and blunt. Your profile isn't terrible, but it's also not particularly interesting and it's poorly constructed if your aim is to find people with whom to have sex.

So, there is something wrong with the syntax in your tagline. Also, the word "hungry" should probably not appear, since it gives rise to thoughts of teeth and that's not such a great first impression.

In Looking For, talk about the people you're looking for and not about yourselves. You have other categories for that and you're missing a bet if you don't say more about who you're looking for and what you're looking to do with them. Also, don't talk about what you aren't looking for. Your toggles express no interest in single men and you have the option of blocking them, so you needn't speak of them. The information about messages vs. IM belongs in Additional comments and it's women, not females. In Fantasies you talk about being a FWB couple and while I don't entirely know what that means (which means you should explain it more clearly), it is information that belongs in this section.

In Description, don't talk about things that can be seen in photos or are in your toggles. And while I think of it, the best reason for listing everyone's weight is that people really will give you a pass with that zero. Nobody cares what you weigh, they just don't want to bother with the lack of confidence it denotes. And the same room/soft thing, with revisions (because this sentence focuses on you) belongs in Looking For. Instead, talk about the kind of people you are, what your interests are, etc., in a way that gives a sense of you. This is basically where you focus on your uniqueness and what you have to offer others.

With Fantasies, you're fine if you start with "He is straight..." and end with "...had a(n) ffm." The rest doesn't belong there. But do say if you have any fantasies.

End on a high note of some kind in Additional comments. And, yeah, please take out that silly warning.

Good luck.

Your profile isn't necessarily bad it's more like unpolished.

First off, it looks like it was written entirely from the guy's point of view. Go over it again and do it on a computer. It looks like you wrote it on a phone because random words are capitalized. Spelling counts. Think of SLS as a resume for sex. If you got a resume and saw a spelling mistake, what would you do?

You need to put the female half's accurate weight. I won't engage couples who have 0 lbs in their profile - many other couples won't either. If I have to deal with being a size 12, you do too.

Take out the profile warning. It's like the urban legend of SLS and it doesn't mean anything,

The pictures you have are good, but you need more and some in different poses. Normally I say you need 5 pictures: Male face and body, female face and body and then a picture of the two of you together dressed well like you are going to a nice dinner or church. Then you should have 5 more pictures of you doing interesting things: Traveling, or playing sports or engaging in a hobby. Don't post anything with a gun or a fish.

When it comes to posing, I have a trick for the female half. Google the word "contrapposto". It's the reason why Greek statues looked so good. Also look at my profile and how I am standing in my bikini picture. This picture is classic contrapposto. Have the female half stand like that. It works out well for the male half too.

The picture of you two dressed nice like you are going out to dinner or church is very important because it proves to me that you know how to dress if I meet you for dinner. So have someone watch the kids, go out to a nice dinner (not Applebees) and have the waitress take a picture of you.

So take some new pictures, post them and come back for review. If you need some suggestions, PM me.

Regarding your profile text...

Take out "No poop, pee or pain." Nobody is going to ask you to poop on them. Write a little more about your hobbies. I call these things "hooks" as it it "hooks" people into contacting you. There is a reason I talk about my hobbies and show myself running races or riding bikes. I'm trying to appeal to people with similar hobbies so that they write me. People are afraid of rejection, so if the only thing they can write you about is sex, they may not choose to write you at all. So if someone has some similar hobbies to write you about, you are increasing the chances of being contacted because people will be more comfortable engaging you.

So make a few text and picture changes and go from there.

Hi new to the LS. Would love some help with our profile. Never know what to say.