Hi. I'm glad you understand the process is meant to be constructive. I'm thirding the suggestion to just go ahead and add your weights back in. I agree that your photos should be enough, but it's a bit of a red flag, indicating as it does that one or both of you is uncomfortable with your weight and your photo might not be recent.
You might want to consider the optics of your current age range preference as well, which is 15 years younger than her and five years older, which tends to indicate that you're uncomfortable with your current ages, or at least think you're near the top end for desirability.
Your tagline, if it can't be clever, should at least be serviceable and free of typos, which isn't currently the case.
For your profile text, eh. In a crowded field, you don't stand out in any positive way and I think you can do way better.
Looking For is meant to be about others. The only current sentence that does that is the first and it has a typo as well as some awkward phrasing. Try using declarative sentences more often. Instead of "We are open..., " try, "We're looking for non-smoking couples and singles for exploration. Looks are important, but chemistry is more important. (You might want to try Anyone up for a chemistry experiment as a tagline, btw.)
And then say more about what you're looking for. Is it friends with benefits? Hot one nighters? Oh, yeah, this can also be the place to talk about wanting same room play.
Description is more typos and awkward phrasing. That's why you should read your drafts out loud, because that will catch stuff like this. Anyway, this section has more negatives than positives. That you feel the need to state you love each other is a bit of a red flag. We tend not to mention things that are the foundations of our lives, because they're foundational and need no mention. So, it sounds defensive. The second to last sentence is just a head scratcher. Why did you feel the need to mention what you don't have and don't need? Do you want to underscore personal defensiveness? No? Then stick to the positives, please.
Who are you and why should I contact you? How are you awesome and unique? Put some of that in here.
Fantasies is the place for saying you're new and that you've had fantasies of threesomes and foursomes. You needn't be graphic, but give others a chance of identifying with you in this section.
Additional comments is probably the best place to say you're both straight, but she's curious. I would change her current orientation to bi-curious though, because that will capture those looking for w/w play.
End on a high note of some kind.
Good luck and let us know if/when you want a review of your changes.
