Overall not a horrible profile. We've seen much worse. So kudos to giving it the old college try. However, there are a few things we observed that might be of assistance..
1- You definitely need more pics. The one you have doesn't much of who you are. Its fine to hide your face in the public pics but at least show 1 full body (fully clothed) and some idea of what you enjoy doing. I.E. A pic of you at a wine tasting or somewhere else interesting.
2 - Where do you live that 9" is average? Seriously, Mrs AandJ wants to know.
3 - There's a level of redundancy in your profile that, to us, comes across as bordering on desperation. "We can meet for coffee..." followed by " I'm on board with that 100%" We know you're on board with it, you just said so.
I'm sure others will be along soon enough to give their opinions. Good luck!

