AandJinNNJVeteran
Ringwood, NJ, Us
There's not ail that much to critique. You want to have sex. That's about all we got from your profile.
I'd start by adding in some details about the two of you in the description section. What do you like to do for fun? We know you like to fuck but what else? Sports, concerts what?
It needn't be a novel but folks need to know a little about you. They need to understand that they'll be something to talk about before and after the fucking. They want to know there's mutual topics of interest.
Your pics aren't bad. In fact, you're a very attractive couple. But they're all apparently selfies. Take some of each other.
That's our 2 cents anyway.