Profile critique

Good points from Wandering. I would change the screen name. "Dusk in the forest" sounds like the opening scene in a horror movie. lol You need to be able to show those that may be interested a more clear and visual representation of you. Think about what you would want to see in someone you were considering for casual sex. Additionally, the line about only wanting people you may be interested in an ongoing relationship with is going to severely limit those who will contact you.

Thanks. Some good stuff to consider.

Well I would definitely find a different picture. Even if you don't want to show your face that picture isn't good. You are too far away and blurry.

You can have someone take a nice full body shot of you following the ideas in the pinned post. Then you can blur out the top of your face, but I would show a smile.

Your tag line is nothing great, it wouldn't cause me to stop and read your profile.

Remove the comment about drama. no one wants it and those who bring it don't think they are the dramatic ones so they will ignore it anyway.

You repeat what you are looking for a couple of times in the description area. I would remove that as it's just adding words and repeating what you've already said.

I would share some of your fantasies, we are here to swing, it's ok to talk about fantasies openly.

I would add that you don't want to show your face but will profile full body and face photos upon request. Many will not talk to you if you don't have a face and full body pic available.

Good luck!

I think I'd be interested in a profile critique. How could I make mine better? The caveat is that I'm not interested in showing my face to the public at large which would be ideal, but perhaps I can make up for that by making my profile more intriguing? My ideal matches would be couples and single females. Anything I'm missing?