Profile critique?

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi and welcome. If your profile was brand new, I'd make a few suggestions and send you on your way, because it's pretty good as is. However, your biggest problem is that you have no certs. In all likelihood, that is going to cut down interest in your profile. So, pretty good is probably not going to be enough.

In Looking for, change all the singular instances of "couple" to couples. Even if you are looking for your one and only, you don't want to look clingy and the way to avoid that is to appear open to multiple couples. So, really, fix that. You're hoping to find couples you can have fun with, no "which," no "perhaps," no question mark. "Maybe more" is a good sentence, don't dilute it with question marks, not one and certainly not two.

In Description, just lose "in fact, I almost prefer it." You say it better in the next sentence. And it's when merged, no its, comma after myself, and end the paragraph after fit and healthy. Lose the exclamation mark after ecstasy and insert a blank line between it and the next paragraph. Actually, lose all but one exclamation points. You're a guy and you only get one. Sorry not sorry.

You need content in Additional comments and maybe in Fantasies. The former might be a good place to use that line about being willing to travel but of course looking for local playmates.

Happy to look again after you've collected more advice (you need more and different photos, btw) and made some changes.

Virginia Beach, VA, Us

Picture wise - Keep the bike, ditch the picture of you looking down at the camera. It makes you look like you have a double chin.

Try to look up at a camera, or at least do "ears front" where you kind of crane your neck forward.

Try to get one or two pictures of you wearing a suit. Suits to women are like garters to men.

I'm looking to make my profile better- what are your thoughts?