Profile criticism please.

Oh I completely understand and am taking all points as a constructive criticism.
Already started working on it albeit it'll take time and revision to get to where we want it to be.

"We're not saying any of this to be rude or mean. Just pointing out how we felt when we read your profile."

Good point. What you get when someone reviews your profile is their articulation of the things that they feel or think when they read it. We're basically all acting as a kind of group mind for everyone who looks at your profile in hopes that you're what they're looking for. And pointing out the negative responses is the best way to get people to eliminate them.

So, yes, Ad_iron, be the interesting person in your profile that you are in person and here in this thread.

A few comments from us

First - welcome to the fora. Second, keep that great attitude and you'll be fine.

Ok - on to the profile.

Great default pic. Shows an attractive gentleman that looks like he is a very interesting person to know. So we read your profile and ask where did that interesting guy go?

There's nothing in your profile to grab anyone's attention.

Like minded? How do we know if we're like minded? You didn't tell us about your mind.

You have to be discrete for your career. Congrats. So do the rest of us generally. That line actually sounds selfish to us. Like you're only worried whether you are outed.

We're not saying any of this to be rude or mean. Just pointing out how we felt when we read your profile.

Good luck

Welcome to the fora, ad_iron. Kudos for accepting the advice with good cheer, which is becoming rarer and rarer. A good attitude like that will serve you well, both here and in vanilla life.

Since I can't see your profile, I'd just suggest reading through other folks' profile reviews here. Lots of good advice there to be had, even if it wasn't written specifically for you. And remember that your profile is ALWAYS a work in progress.

Best of luck!

@Googgollymsmolly
To your finer points, Its just how the picture came out. but I'll get better pictures.
Yes, I'm south Asian. I felt like I have to make it clear to filter out people who may be interested for a whole only to find out later and their interest wanes away.
Nothing to do with specific fantasies, although some people have approached because of it.

Anyhow, I'll keep working on it. It is my second resume after all.

Thanks a lot for the critique.
Looks like I’ll have to spend a little more time reviewing , rewriting and refining my profile.
On second reading, I felt it was bland, monotonous and nothing exciting.
I’ll put in a little more of an effort before coming in for another round.
Appreciate it.

I did take the pointers on being polite,well dressed and well groomed. Fortunately this is what is required in my profession that trickle down to everyday. Definitely couples are letting us in their life and we ought to respect that. Thanks.

Hi and welcome. Nice profile photo, but the other one is kind of meh. Is that shirt a little baggy on you?

Your tagline is okay. I prefer something a little more succinct, but it's not bad. The problem is that all the elements are recycled in your actual profile. You're going to have to decide, because it's one place or the other, not both.

In Looking For, you use the phrase "like minded" but make no attempt to define what you mean. You'd be better off just saying what you're looking for and why you're looking for them. Some variation of 'I'm looking for women and couples with whom to explore our desires' is fine. You needn't be elaborate. That's not what "takeaways" means, so you need another way to describe what you hope to get out of it. The sentence about getting in touch? Eh. Mostly you'll have to do the getting in touch, but in any case the sentence belongs in the very last section.

In Description, that part about looking for chemistry belongs in Looking For. I'm not sure how to handle the not Caucasian thing. I thought South Asian when I saw your photo, which I looked at before I read your profile. Is it important to you for people to know for sure you're not Caucasian before contacting you or responding to your email?

In Fantasies, the part about being attracted to professional, etc., belongs in Looking For, and I think it will sound better if you say you prefer more mature couples. It means the same thing, but women don't particularly like being reminded they're older; mature has more wiggle room in it, or at least feels as if it does.

Basically you need a little more content in each section, some things need to be moved, and you should add a blank line in between paragraphs.

Maybe do a little more work and then come back for a review?

Good luck.

As a single male , increasing chances of visibility depends on every little thing.
Being polite, through profile and a good set of interests is a start.
Unsolicited emails to couples is a shureshot way of getting blocked.
So presentation first.
All criticisms welcomed.