Profile comments and suggestions please!!

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Hi,
Could someone please take a look at my profile and let me know if I need to make any changes please. Because I don’t think anyone is looking at my profile. I know I do have one problem with the default picture and for some reason or another it will not let me set up a default picture so others will know what I look like. Any help would be appreciated, thanks.

Again Thanks,

Your friend

Hi. As you might have noticed, people responding in this section are really blunt. I'm not going to apologize for that, because it's necessary. If someone didn't tell you your profile was terrible, you might be able to fool yourself into thinking you were on the right track. In this case, you definitely aren't. So, I'm going to be rude, but the aim is to get you laid. Keep that in mind.

First, your photo is bad. You look high. And bored. Velma might show up with specific advice, but if she doesn't (she ran a triathlon earlier today and mentioned something about herself to five guys afterwards), check out the advice she's given on other threads. My personal advice is to smile, keep your damn clothes on unless the photo is taken at a beach or pool, watch your backgrounds, have at least one full body shot, and never, ever, ever post a selfie. Also, select a default photo (Tools/Manage Pictures/Choose a new Default).

As far as your text is concerned, you could do a better job if you just chose words at random.

Starting with your tagline, if I was looking for a guy, do you really think I'm going to get all excited about one who bills himself as The Punisher? Let me not leave you in suspense: the answer is no. And I like it rough, so you've really gone off the rails here and demonstrated a lack of knowledge about women. But, hey, it's spelled right, so it has that going for it.

The rest of your profile, not so much with the spelling and grammar. You typed this on your phone, didn't you? It shows.

Looking For is about who you're looking for (fun loving is fine, but particularly since you indicate a lesser interest in couples than women, you need to explain it), what you want to do (hang out is too words) and something about what kind of thing you're looking for in those people you want to see themselves in what you've written.

Description is a mess. Start over and this time do it on something with a robust way of checking spelling and grammar. Who are you? What are some of your interests? I know you're 24, but rest of us aren't and the level of language you're going for is more along the lines of a resume rather than a text. So, whatever you're down for, find a better way to say it. As in, nicht nein on the "down for..." Instead, be the interesting person you are, dressed up a bit for company.

Fantasy wouldn't be terrible - even though it has more detail than I'd recommend - except your syntax is really bad here. So, your story is overly detailed and it doesn't entirely makes sense or put you in a good light. So, maybe revise it and talk about your current fantasies and what your experience is.

Additional comments - no to the Haha, not to the "girls," no to the missing words, but it's generally okay.

Back to start for you and make sure that you read everything out loud even after spelling and grammar checks to catch the weird errors.

Good luck and come back once you've made some changes.

Honest feedback:
Your profile is terrible.

Do this: imagine yourself as a couple or a single woman. What kind of pictures would you want to see? What would you want to read?

Go and look at other male profiles that look like yours. Do you see anything at all that is appealing in those profiles? Realize that we see your profile exactly the same way.

I’m new and try to make the best impression, please give some honest feedbacks and how my profile looks and what are to be include