Hi. I'm going to say mean things about your profile and it can feel really uncomfortable. I'm sorry about that, but it's the most effective way to give a critique. Try to stay with it and understand that the purpose is to highlight the things in your profile that are getting in your way and keeping you from having the sex you want.
So, first, your photos aren't great. One sultry shot of her isn't a terrible idea, because it's mostly men on here doing the initial searching, but for the rest, please keep your clothes on and look like you're in love. Smile, even if we can't see you doing it.
Second, you have that monumentally stupid Sydney University thing taking up space and since you're using one of the original ones it makes you look even more gullible. Why do I say that? Go look up those statutes you've cited. Or save time and delete it, because a) it's an internet legend, and b) do you really plan on suing anyone who copies your photo?
Before I get to your actual profile text, you have several red flags. You're smokers, you're new, you want bareback, and she "seems to be warming up" to seeing him with another woman. Yeah, that last one? It screams drama and I can't imagine most couples reading it going oh, hey, let's contact them, because it'll be fun to see a stranger lose her shit. And the barebacking thing will be a no for most of us, at least on the internet.
I think a lot of us operate with magical thinking - we'll do oral without condoms or dams, but not penetration - and although it isn't logical, refuse to play with those who want to do it differently. Also, side note, always have a large supply of non-latex condoms with you.
As far as your profile itself, it's a bit of a mess. It's full of typos, you have the wall o' text effect because you're not paragraphing, and it's not particularly well written.
In Looking For, you don't need to talk about your devotion to one another. It's assumed, the way it's assumed that most people have elbows between their forearms and upper arms. Why would you need to emphasize either if you're certain? You needn't include that you want to add to your life together or that you aren't looking for one night stands. With the latter, stick with emphasizing you want on-going instead of phrasing it as a negative.
The section that begins "We are interested in MFM..." and runs to the end can be moved in its entirety to Additional comments.
In Description, your photos need to do the job of showing that you're HWP and good looking. The condom thing also goes into Additional comments, right between "...same room only" and "We primarily play..." And leave off the sentence about questions.
Fantasies is mostly okay, but again, you've got that big ole red flag there and what I really want the two of you to do is continue talking until you're not a drama bomb waiting to go off.
And that's all the time I have. Good luck and I hope you make some changes and come back for a review.
