Please give us advice

Hi and welcome. Your profile requires two things: photos and a run through spell check. The rest is optional, but bears consideration.

There are two instances that make it sound as if she is reluctant. I would avoid you for that. The snark about superficiality isn't a good look and you'd be better served if you spun that as "if you're bothered." I don't care about him being an amputee, but I nope for negativity, if that clarifies things.

Other than that, I think you do a decent job here.

Very new to all of this and would appriciate some honest criticism and advice on our profile.