Oh, and PS, please, please, no photos in your public gallery of him grabbing his cock. I'll explain why if you insist, but otherwise maybe just trust me and lose it. You've already got a cert that does your advertising for you, in any case.
Hi and welcome. My first impression is that you're really sloppy and bland. That's not so great. So, for starters, eliminate one of those duplicate certs, remove any photos that have crap on the floor, and once you're satisfied with your profile, read it out loud to eliminate things that are wrong but that spell check won't necessarily notice.
As far as the blandness, say something more about yourselves in Description. Who are you and why, other than your looks, would people be interested in you? What do you do for fun? What interests you? You don't have to write a novel, but be more that a hot fun couple looking for fun, because that's a given and no different than any 100 other profiles. Everyone is unique; show some of that. If you can, do something similar in Looking For.
In Fantasies, eh. Again, say something that is a little revealing.
And don't leave any of your sections blank, because that's valuable marketing real estate and you want to use it to market yourselves well so that you have a large pool to choose from.
Good luck.
Your profile isn't bad, and let's get real. You two are young and hot enough to write stereo instructions in the profile text and still get people.
Picture-wise, you never want to have two pictures with the same thing. Pictures are precious real-estate. You have one shirtless picture of the male and one bikini picture of the female. Then you have a picture with the two of you stitched together. I would either take out the stitched picture or remove the pictures that contributed to the stitched picture. Why show what is essentially the same picture?
I would add some pictures of you doing interesting things outside such as cycling or going swimming. I would add a picture of the two of you dressed well like you are going to church, but it isn't super necessary. Like I said, you are hot enough to get away with a lot.
Your profile text is kind of blah. It's more like cut and paste cliche "hot and fun" couple text. You really don't show any personality. I usually suggest to add in "hooks" which are elements designed to draw a reader into contacting us. We talk about our hobbies and interests. This makes it easier for people to contact you because right now, the only thing they can talk about is how hot you are.
So make the changes and repost.
Would like to have our profile reviewed and given any suggestions on to make it better. Thank you
