Please Critique

Virginia Beach, VA, Us

I’m going to be nicer than normal since my husband and I occasionally go to Pleasure Garden and we might actually end up fucking you one day.

Your pictures are good but Uninspired. I kind of feel like the male half is just phoning it in. He’s wearing Levi’s jeans and a tucked in shirt-I’m looking for the phone holster.

Always remember that a suit to women is like garters to men. I would add at least one picture of the two of you together dressed nicely like you are going to a nice dinner or church. I would also add in a couple of pictures of the two of you doing interesting things. Go to a Phillies game and take a few pictures, go for a bike ride or some pictures from vacation.

Stuff like this acts as a “hook” to get people talking to you without only being able to talk about sex.

So in our case. We have nudes of me playing my Clarinet. We’re cycling. We’re at a Nationals game. We’re running. It’s all stuff that helps establish commonality with someone else so they feel more comfortable approaching us.

In your case-this may not be necessary because it seems like you only play at clubs So if you meet someone-you’re probably going to gauge attractivenes in person.

But there’s always the chance someone might Reach out to you before going to a club if your pictures are interesting. So I would work on that-put up pictures of you two doing interesting things Get rid of the male ail half in dad jeans and replace it with something in a suit, And repost so we can take a look at it.

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi and welcome. I'm always kind of torn about your sort of profile. It's laudably thorough, doesn't have a lot of typos (i think I saw one), and somehow just misses being interesting. Mind, I'm not saying anything about you, just your profile.

So, I'm going to recommend you do some pruning and shuffling to see if that livens up things.

First, in Looking For, it's "are in happy," no "a." Then, you talk a great deal about yourselves and very little about the people you will be meeting. It's a peeve, but I also think that in this case it contributed to my lack of interest. Maybe prune that section quite a lot and move some of the content to Description or Additional.

Everyone knows what hwp means, so you can leave that out and if SLS is working properly, indicating lack of interest in single men blocks them, so that bit is pointless. Also, while I remember, please remove that Sydney University nonsense. It's unenforceable and based on a kind of alligators in the sewers urban legend.

For the rest, I'd like to see if my impression of your tone changes with some changes. Also, you might want to get rid of your oldest cert.

Good luck.

AandJinNNJVeteran
Ringwood, NJ, Us

I guess the only thing I can nitpick on is the repeated use of the word 'selectively'

Just don't know you need it more than once. If you're having success meeting the people you want to meet I see no need to change anything.

I'll let you know if A has any comments.

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