New profile and learning

I really, really wish the technical small gods of SLS would give us an editing function.

Sorry, there's a confusing typo. It's "...so I know I'm repeating myself, but that zero, etc."

Holy crap. You're not kidding about him being very tall.

Okay, now that's out of my system, you really need more and better photos, particularly a full body shot of her. And, yeah, her weight needs to be listed. I've said this twice already in the past few days, so I know I'm repeating myself (and feel, but that zero is a clear indicator that she does not love her body and just might be too self conscious to actually enjoy sex, being up in her head wondering if things are jiggling unattractively. Also, there are a lot of us that don't give a flying fuck about your weight but will turn you down for that zero, mostly for the reasons I just outlined. Own your body and celebrate it, including whatever number is on the scale.

Moving on, Looking For is for listing the people you're looking for. Is it mostly couples and maybe a single woman? You're open to both? Say so. And then something about what you're looking for with them. That part about being open to opportunities to play as singles actually belongs here.

In Description, it's fine to talk about being a part time couple or that you both travel. Both just makes it sound too difficult to ever get together with you. So, pick one. And say more about yourselves here. What do you like to do when you aren't fucking? What kind of people are you? Why would I want to contact you?

In Fantasies, that's the perfect place to either mention for the first time that she's kinky or explain a little about what kind of kink she likes and if it's a requirement.

Additional comments: You already have single men blocked, so they won't be getting this message. The rest of us will though and it makes it look like she's only interested in playing with women. So, maybe eliminate that. Actually, no maybe. You really should just lose it if you want to do any sort of couple swap or threesomes.

Anyway, make whatever changes seem good after you collect more advice and then run the whole thing through spell check, add blank lines between paragraphs, and then come back for a review.

I think you have the couple/singles thing handled pretty well already, btw.

Good luck!

We are new on this profile and would like some feedback and any ideas that would help us both together or as singles .