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Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. I apologize in advance for my bluntness. It's kindly meant, I promise.

Okay, so, while I really appreciate photos that show different facets of someone, the pic of you in the hoodie is not a good one. So, really nice idea, poor execution, but do have someone else take photos of you in regular clothes.

Your tagline is good. Make sure to change it and your default photo periodically.

In Looking For, the second paragraph is just word salad. You might know what you mean, but it's not going to be clear to others. It can't actually be improved, so just get rid of it. The first paragraph isn't great and if you were older I'd tell you how to fix it, but I think it has some charm just the way it is and you should keep it. However, if you're also interested in solo women, you have to mention them here too.

In Description, you've taken a few technically wrong turns, but keep it the way it is. After you get more experience, then you'll have to change it to something a little less naive, but right now the innocence of it works in your favor.

In Fantasies, it's good. Just lose this: "..., it's easier for them to feel comfortable if they don't want to share." That's not really within your purview, so leave it out.

Additional comments takes your puppylike enthusiasm one step too far. Your profile, if it's authentic, reflects where you are at the moment. And right now you're 22, so you're unlikely to be particularly intriguing, so nothing anyone can advise is going to change that. Instead of sounding high maintenance, which this section does, just end on some sort of high note.

Anyway, I hope you come back once you've made changes.

Virginia Beach, VA, Us

I like it-my only suggestion would be to remove the selfie with you in the fur-lined jacket. It doesn’t fit with the other nice pictures. That’s my initial thought. I’ll try to write more later when I’m not at work.

Mankato, MN, Us

I've actually been using this on and off for awhile and never really got into the forum. How does my profile seem to you?