JALOGAN7777

Thank you all! I love the critics and suggestions. I’m on them!

Hi and welcome. Your profile is good, but there are some typos (it's play not ploy), you've been victimized by SLS's Want Drinkers/Smokers gift to its members (after you make all the changes and get them approved, then and only then change your toggles to reflect your preferences), and you're so busy selling yourself to your next LTR that you're giving potential playmates short shrift.

I apologize for rudeness, but if you're just out of a relationship, it's worryingly soon to be looking for a new one. So even if that's exactly what you want, it will make a better impression if you talk about that eventual LTR in slightly less immediate terms.

Spend a few words saying more about the couples and women you would like to meet along the way as something other than an afterthought. Because they matter too, you know?

Don't mention the whole single male outcast thing. Do, if you were swinging while married, mention that. Because that's an indication you know the drill and are reliable in the presence of other men.

So, basically, soften the parts that are solely focused on that next relationship and expand the bits that include potential playmates. Fix your wonky punctuation and typos, say more about yourself in Description (who are you?) and then come back and check in to see if there are some useful tweaks still to be made.

Good luck.

Nothing to rip up.

I would have at least one shirtless pool pic and maybe get rid of the pot hat since you’re not 14. A pic in a suit with no tie would be good.

But you look like the kind of guy who would pound me from behind, pull my hair and not give a shit about me. So you’re good in my book.

Good afternoon Everyone!
I am looking for amazing women to review my profile and critique it for improvements.

I am divorced and have been in the LS for 20 years. I travel a lot, enjoy all LS events, and want to live fully.

Rip me up!!