I have updated the written portion of our profile. Cleaned it up a little, re-worded a few things, and made sure to remove stuff that was repetitive. I will be going through and updating our pictures in the next week or so. Any other recommendations?
Thanks PhoebertAndWife for the recommendations. I'll go through and remove some repetitive text and minimize some of the similar looking photos.
Our goal is to have our profile be very straight forward so those who do read it and meet up with us, already feel like they know us in a way. And this has actually worked several times. We post hot dates and theyll read our profile, and within minutes of them getting to our hotel room, everyone is naked. We have 18 certs so far, should have about 4 more but some couples don't do certs and we can respect that. For us, we want our cert count to go up even further. And we won't accept a cert just because we met the couple, we only accept it if we had sex with them and we gladly leave certs as well.
I'll take some time this evening to go through our profile and if anyone else has any thoughts, please feel free to share!
Today has fried my brain.
I read your profile text earlier today but I"m going to just leave you with my general thoughts from the middle of the night. Careful edits will retain your personality and eliminate the excess and repetition.
Hope you continue to have success!
Hi. I'm actually not going to critique your profile. You are clearly the right flavor for a lot of people and I'm just not willing to mess with that. Good luck.
There is this moment at Stanley Spadowski's Clubhouse that seems to fit your profile well. There is little doubt about who people are going to meet when they contact you. You all have done a great job of seeing to that. The one thing you may want to do when culling down on the pictures are repetitions of the same types or sorts of pictures. Also, ladies want to know what type of facial hair you will have when you go to meet them. Try and make the pics in the profile fit the way you look now. The profile and pics both have a bit of repetition in them. Cut that back a bit. The thing with long profiles is they do a fairly good job of weeding out some potential mismatches and almost always indicate a legitimate couple.
Have you read other reviews? Hopefully coronavirus exhaustion doesn't make any of us more blunt than usual. Remember - we really do believe it's all about the profile and not you personally.
Eighteen certs in four months - you're obviously having success. But you may be able to do better - some people may be turned off by your profile.
I'm not willing to wade through a wall of text and abundance of pictures to decide if we might be a good fit. I can't even wade through it at this hour of the night to give a review! Most of us have limited time for swinging - and that includes time searching for couples to play with.
So my gut reaction to your profile is that editing is required - both text and pictures. I'll read it carefully in the morning and hopefully come back with specifics but in general don't repeat yourself, don't include stats in your text (that's why there's a stats section), keep it all as positive as possible and put information in the correct section.
My general advice for photos is smile, watch for clutter or visual chaos and avoid selfies (especially bathroom mirror selfies). There is no reason to have individual selfies - take pictures of each other. If you have several pictures that are essentially the same, keep the best one and delete the rest. SMILE - the neutral expression is not very welcoming. Velma's DEBauCH system outlines five core photos for your public gallery - with another five or so you should have enough to entice people to contact you or reply. Put any additional photos in separate galleries - but only if they're keepers.
Your profile is an advertisement. Your enthusiasm is wonderful and charming - I expect your profile will be longer than most, which lets your personalities shine through. Right now it's a bit overwhelming.
Have fun and stay safe!
~Phoebert's Wife
Hi, my wife and have been on SLS since October. We initially started with the 3 month subscription but learned early on that we want to go lifetime. We have had lots of success for the most part. We definitely like getting our cert count up and establish ourselves as a fun couple in our region. I (male half) mainly run our profile and I did put a lot of info in our profile. I know it is long, but is it too long? Is there too much info? Or is having all this info better to let others know pretty much exactly what we are like and looking for?
Our name is coaster_couple because we travel the country to visit amusement parks and ride roller coasters all over. Once we start travelling again, we definitely hope to meet fun couples near some parks that we visit via setting up a hot date.
What do you think about our profile? Anything we can do to improve it? Any tip/recommendation would be really helpful. We love SLS and hope to meet even more couples.
Thanks!
