Hi. It's always interesting when people make some changes and then come back for a review. Thanks for that.
First, before I start, once you've made all the changes you're going to make and get them approved, you'll need to go in and change your toggles to reflect your actual preferences for smoking and drinking (unless you want smokers and drinkers, which is the current default). Don't make any other changes.
Okay, so, nobody has a nice enough body for me to not be puzzled about why you're taking half naked photos in a department store. I may be in the minority, though. I think the other two photos are better, regardless.
Your tagline contains the phrase "like minded" which doesn't mean anything. Also, you might as well lay it out right away that you're only looking for women. If you also correct the typo, maybe "Looking for women for fun and adventure" would do it. It's not clever or funny, but it will do. You should also adjust your toggles to reflect less interest in couples, because you don't want them - just hot wives/women playing separately who don't bring their husbands along.
Here's a sentence that will send up a red flag for those husbands: It means the male half can't be present in the same room. Nuh-uh. No. Nope. That can't thing just lost you all but small subsection of cuckold couples. You can get to roughly the same place by saying you are only interested in playing with single women (not females) and the female halves of couples playing separately.
For the rest, you still have some typos, you don't seem to understand paragraphing (at the very least, a blank line between them) or ellipses, and you really needn't duplicate what is in your states. Plus, please fill out that last section, because it shouldn't look like you can't be bothered to finish things. Leaves a bad impression, you know? Oh, and not many women are going to message you, so that looks a bit...naïve? Not very aware of how women do things, anyway.
It would also help, if you're attracted to a wider variety of women, to say so. Otherwise, the women with softer bodies are going to assume you aren't interested. If your actual range is narrow, you're fine the way you are.
And if I really did see a lol there, you should remove it. This is a fairly formal piece of writing.
Good luck. Upping your age range will help.