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I'm looking for some constructive criticisms about my profile and maybe suggestions on how i can make it read better to help attract potential playmates. Any help would do. Thank You
Thank you guys for the insight! going "under construction"!
Hi. If you've read any of the other threads, you know the advice most of us give is bluntly phrased. It's kindly meant though and about your profile, not you.
Unlike mayhem, i really like one of your photos - fully dressed, great shoes - and I like the composition of your default, but I don't think it's an effective pic.
Your age range of half your age to five years older is unrealistic, plus while there are younger couples it's a much smaller pool than you'd find if you raised your upper limit. Also, either you're a boy toy or you aren't and for a 40 year old woman, you aren't.
As far as your text, it's not going to appeal to many women. Men - and it's the male half of mayhem who has commented - will mostly think it is fine.
Looking For is mostly okay, but it's women rather than "female," for reasons of grammar and your interest in men is more ambiguous than I think you realize. Wind in the bicurious is not bi thing, shorten the combo and clear things up.
Description is your biggest misfire. Yes, we're here for sex, but when is the last time you saw a profile where the woman described the size or shape of her pussy? There's a reason for that and it's not because there's any less variety there than there is in cocks. Put your dick away, at least metaphorically, because it's not special, and leave it to your certs to talk about how you sex. And people who want to know about your dick ahead of time will let you know.
Instead, focus on what is special, which is who you are as a person. What kind of a man are you? What are your interests? Let your photos do the job of providing your physical description.
Fantasies is good.
Additional comments needs to lose the first sentence. And the DISCRETION thing is a little overly emphatic unless you're married, in the military or in a job with a morals clause. So, it's a little off-putting/red flag raising.
Good luck. I hope other people chime in.
Your text isn't too bad. In Description you can drop all of the physical description because that's what pictures are for. You should add the things that pictures can't show, such as general personality traits and interests/hobbies other than sex as potential talking points.
Speaking of the pictures, not trying to be mean, but I feel like you'd actually be more successful if you deleted all of them. Most of the ones you have belong in a private gallery and your profile pic looks like you're laying there playing with yourself. You'd be better off with a picture of you dressed in decent clothes with a big smile, and one that's taken by someone else and not a selfie.
I'm sure others will have lots more to say, but just hitting the obvious for now.
I'm looking for some constructive criticisms about my profile and maybe suggestions on how i can make it read better to help attract potential playmates. Any help would do. Thank You
