Help with improving profile

Phoenix, AZ, Us

I hope you really mean it when you say you want to be bossed around. If so, you've come to the right place. And, joking aside, while it's kindly meant, I'm going to be very blunt.

So, your tagline starts out with "Keep it classy, never trashy," but there your dick is in your public photos. Would you walk up to a woman in a restaurant and slap your dick out on the table? Because that's essentially what you're currently doing, it's definitely trashy, and that is going to limit the people you currently attract. Photos of you fully dressed please, preferably with a pleasant expression on your face, including some full length, taken by other people.

Between your profile name and your certs, you don't even need to mention your dick let alone show it, but for those who want photographic proof, have a photo in a private gallery that you open upon request.

For the written portion of your profile, you have typos and it's not particularly interesting as is, but I think it mostly just needs a little cleaning up. Run it through a spelling and grammar check on a computer instead of just composing on your phone, which will catch the obvious errors.

In Looking For, you have a good start, aside from the typos, but saying you want to be handled in numerous ways doesn't exactly belong there unless you're signaling that you're primarily a sub or that it's important for you to take a passive role. So, instead, say something about the kind of people you're looking for, even if it's nothing more than you're open to a variety of ages and body types, if that's true. Oh, and it's women rather than females, no matter what SLS says.

In Description, you've done a really nice job of laying out the kinds of things you like to do, but you've skimped a bit on the sort of man you are. It's not necessary to add a bit that does that, but you could. The only other thing is that saying you're open minded is generally taken to mean that you're okay with same sex play. If you are, that's great. If not, find a way to be more specific without being graphic.

In Fantasy, it's bossed and punished. You might also say a bit about the kinds of experiences you've had. Again, not graphic, just if you're experienced with couples or FMF or cuckolding or whatever, say so.

Please don't leave Additional comments blank. You only have so many chances to charm people, so don't forego any. It doesn't really matter what you say here, so long as you end on a high note.

Good luck. I hope you make some changes, especially in your photos, and come back so we can take another look.

Fort Payne, AL, Us

You'd probably get as much help by reading advice to others in this forum but bless your heart for asking for your own review. We may sound mean and/or picky but we really just want to help you have success online.

I can't tell if you're just moving too fast on a too small keyboard or if you're writing like you talk. In several places you've dropped "ed" from the end of words (handled, bossed, punished) and it's hard to comprehend your meaning. You've done a pretty good job of answering the implied question of each section - but there's no need to repeat something in your stats (tall) or that shows in your pictures (handsome). Perhaps add some experience to the Experience/Fantasy section and definitely fill out the last section (maybe mention if you can host or will travel or work an odd shift).

"Et cetera" means "and the rest" so no need for "and" in front of "etc."

None of your pictures are doing you much good - I'd keep the one with the bow tie and toss the rest. For your new pictures, no dick pics in the public gallery (naked or tenting your pants) and SMILE! The neutral expression or concentration on getting that selfie is not at all appealing. This is supposed to be fun - look like someone I'd want to have fun with!

Based on your certs it sounds like you do well once you meet people - with a few tweaks your profile should assist with online contacts.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

HollyBlueVeteran
Bangkok Noi, Th

Well start by nixing the picture of your leg as your default. The one of you in the bow tie is much better. Think about just getting a few really good photos done. You don't need more than one dick pic in a private gallery.

Your profile would be better if you spent a little more time and fleshed out the paragraphs a bit. Be sure to use complete sentences rather than lists. Some will use a bullet point approach, but well written paragraphs work best. You have a solid start and just need to hone it a bit.

Clayton, NC, Us

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