Help me!!!!

Just as long as I can put a smile on someone's face I'm happy lol

It isn't world peace or a cure for cancer, but it's damned useful. So you have that going for you. ;-)

I suppose being a human vibrator isn't such a bad thing right? Lol

I can think of worse fates.

You don't actually suck at this, plus you're willing to ask for help and put effort into the process and that matters. So, yeah, work on Version C when you have time and come back and let us know so you can get it reviewed again.

And, hey, even if it's bad, apparently you have a future as a human vibrator. ;-)

Sorry I suck at this lol. I'm at work now but gonna sit down and really go over everything. I appreciate the feedback

Ggmm,

This is the new and improved version. There was less there before....

But there's still not much there. Spelling and grammar count as Molly said. Run it through Word to fix those if you can't do it yourself.

But give us more. You're still just a human vibrator to us.

I don't know if I'm seeing Version A or Version B, but except for the part about being a good ole (that's the way it's supposed to be spelled) boy from Nebraska (ditto), there's not much there there.

First, please, please, please eliminate the bathroom selfie. And if you're going to take other photos of your very nice chest, don't include your longline boxers. I do not, and am not alone in this, want to see your dick before we've at least exchanged names.

Then, you may have exactly one exclamation mark and no emojis. Unless you're in a boy band. Then it's two and one. So, go fix that part. Also fix your tagline to get rid of the typos. It probably should be Good vibes and good times.

Really, I like your enthusiasm, and except for the typos and the OVERLY ENTHUSIASTIC PUNCTUATION, think Looking For can mostly stay the way it is. Just call women "women" instead of "females" and I'd be sold. Same typo issue in Description, but I like what you have so far. Just say more about yourself. Who are you? What do you like to do? Fantasies, typo alert (it's Or foursome), but it's good.

Put something in Additional comments. Go read other profiles if you need ideas.

Thanks for the feedback! I added some more info and plan to upload more photos tonight

There is nothing to review. Provide some more detail. What are you looking for, what a do you like?

Right now you're just a pic. A pretty hot pic. But just a pic. No personality.

I want to expand my profile and get out there and meet more people but haven't had much luck..