Hi. Thanks for letting me know you've opened your profile to women so that I could view it. You've experienced the bluntness that's the rule around here, so I won't bother to offer the standard disclaimer. Just...it's meant kindly, even when it doesn't feel that way.
Let's do your photos first. There are too many, what you have is often repetitive, and you are not at all careful about the backgrounds, which means I've seen your piled laundry, your toilet, and a cluttered corner of your kitchen. None of these things are appealing and are directly in conflict with your multiple uses of the word "clean." Since she's noped out, you'll have to look elsewhere for the very specific advice Velma gives about successful photos. Mine is to only have 10 or fewer photos, most of them with the two of you together and in street clothes. Smile and be very careful about the backgrounds, which send some unintentional messages.
Your tagline is a waste of an opportunity to attract attention. Try for something clever, if you can. Otherwise, sincere is okay, but in either case try to avoid clichés.
Looking For is meant to be about the people you're looking for and what you're looking for with them. Instead, you've made it all about you. People need to be able to see themselves in this section and you've given them nothing. Who are you looking for? What are you looking to do with them? That's what goes here. I do think this is where you put the information about bareback, because it's such a divisive issue.
For what's in there now, the robo-cock thing, for those who don't know you use a pump, just sounds like boasting. That you are full swap is in your toggles and if you're interested in those 21 and over, change your age range. I would suggest you move your upper age range up as well though, because the optics are better. Most of the rest could use some compression and a move to Additional comments or Description.
Description is about you as people. Who you are, what your interests are (I know you have them listed already, but they belong in this section). I think there's some of that here, but it's buried under a flood of words. You'd be better served by trimming down the extraneous detail about where you want to meet and whether you offer pressure or not in favor of a more concise description of you as a couple.
Fantasies is your strongest section, but it doesn't actually directly address a fantasy. So I think you've perhaps missed an opportunity to connect with another couple that might share that (not at all graphically recounted) fantasy.
Except here, in Additional comments, where you specifically have a fantasy of conversion.
What actually goes here is a lot of other stuff that you've misplaced elsewhere.
There's a bunch of stuff that I'm missing, because there's so much detail that I keep getting lost, so my suggestion is to think of revisions as a process that will take more than one pass.
Good luck.
