Could I get some feedback?

HollyBlueVeteran
Bangkok Noi, Th

You have gotten some good advice. Many of us are unimpressed with men listing their measurements because often times they are pretty off base with what they report.

With the pic it isn't too bad to start with. It shows your personality and an interest. Try and get a few more good ones in the public gallery. Stay away from selfies if at all possible. I am a fan of ink and would love to see more of what you have. Be creative with the pics and try and capture your personality. Don't fall down the sm rabbit hole and fill your private gallery with multiple pics of your privates. One decent full body shot is good enough.

Look forward to seeing the changes that you make.

Fort Payne, AL, Us

Your profile reminds me of a power point presentation - and I really do not want to equate sexy encounters with work. Conversational paragraphs are a lot more appealing.

I think you've gone a bit to far into "just the facts" mode - most of what you've said in your text is indicated in your stats or visible in your picture. You want to entice ladies and couples to contact you. The only bit of your text that works for me are the last two lines of Description, But it's not quite enough.

What type of ladies and couples are you interested in? What sort of encounters are you hoping for? Anything in particular that you've enjoyed in the past? Any unrealized fantasies? Think about the section headers and compose a few sentences (in paragraph form rather than a list) for each.

If Velma doesn't pop by then go looking for her photo advice. The one picture you have is good but a few more in your public gallery wouldn't hurt. Remember to smile, watch for clutter or visual chaos in the background and avoid selfies.

Good luck and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. I hope you've read some of the other threads in this section, so that the bluntness of the advice you're likely to get doesn't come as a surprise. It is, I promise, kindly meant, but nobody pulls their punches and it can feel harsh. Try to roll with it, because it's about the best reflection you're going to get about the people that read your profile and nope out.

Okay, your only public photo is pretty good. Your shirt is really wrinkled, but you're outdoors, so nobody will care. You might consider hunting up Velma's advice for single guys if she doesn't show up to see what else you should have.

Your tagline mistakes the purpose of a tagline. Instead of rehashing what is better handled in other ways, try for something short and either clever or sincere. The idea is to invite others to look at your profile. "Stable" and "sane" are kind of null qualities that most of us just kinda expect, so that's not going to do it. Your toggles give your height and your photo does a pretty good job of displaying your race. So, eh, nothing enticing there at the moment.

Your age range, at young enough to be your child to seven years your senior is an eye roller. If you can't imagine fucking someone 46 that's fine. Silly, but fine. However, raise your lower age so that you don't look quite so creepy.

Looking For is meant to be about who you're looking for and what you're looking for. Your lackluster single sentence has a grammar error (it's women rather than females) and a typo (you're missing a period) isn't going to cut it. You can move up that last sentence in Fantasies (it doesn't belong there anyway), but you're still going to need to write something that actually sounds like you're interested in those couples and women.

In Description, your listicle with every line starting with a personal pronoun is a no. Try an essay instead and vary your sentence structure. Also, have you seen many profiles where women describe their vaginas or vulvas? They're certainly as varied as any cock, but somehow we manage to refrain from talking about their size or appearance. There's probably a reason for that.

I promise, anyone who is curious about your dick will ask. The rest of us would just like to know what kind of human you are and whether there's a better than even chance that you might be fun to meet and play with.

In Fantasies, that's nice, but it would be more helpful to outline your experience and give a non-graphic fantasy or two, because those are far more individual than being turned on by turning on someone.

In Additional comments, you could probably give at least a vague nod to an explanation for having a profile that is over two years old and has no certs. Right now, saying you're newer to the scene when your profile isn't particularly new is a bit of a puzzler. In any case, try to end on a high note.

And in general, if you have any charm at all, your profile is a good place for it. Not everyone is charming, but most people have some, even if trying to display it in writing is a bit of a struggle.

I hope you collect more opinions and then make some changes.

Good luck.

Thousand Oaks, CA, Us

If any of you have time, could I get feedback on my profile? I've been a member for a while but am just getting more active. Any advice is appreciated. Thanks!