Hi. I looked at your photos first and expected your profile to be terrible based on what I saw in your public gallery, but it's really not bad. Before we get to that, here's the disclaimer: You might perceive the advice and critiques you receive to be harsh and even mean. It's not directed at you though, it's about your profile and the ultimate aim is to help you to succeed, which in this case translates to helping you get laid. Speaking for myself, I've discovered that being diplomatic is a waste of time, because people don't listen if there's wiggle room, so now I just exercise my natural bluntness. I'm also nearly everyone's biggest fan, so there's that.
I have nothing good to say about all but one of your photos. The rest are selfies and most of them appear to have been taken in bathrooms. That's a big giant no thank you. There is no body so hot that I will overlook bathroom selfies. You have great abs and I can see wanting to show them, but take that photo at a beach or a pool or someplace where it makes sense to be showing 'em off. For the rest, Velma might visit and give you specific advice, but regardless, most of your photos should present you in actual clothing, including shirts. Also, I hate the way you've obscured your face, but eh. It's one strategy.
As far as your profile is concerned, you've got some issues but it's not terrible. Before I get to specifics though, your biggest issue is a lack of certs. You've been on the site for more than two years and that's too long to be cert-free. That means some couples and women will not even consider you.
So, taglines benefit from being short. Yours isn't. Also, you needn't tell people to contact you if they want to talk, because of course that's what they'll do. "Pleasure and exploration (note the changes)" isn't the snappiest choice, but at least it's short.
In Looking For, since the majority of your play opportunities are going to come from couples (there aren't that many single women on line although there are plenty that swing), your phrasing shouldn't make them sound like an afterthought, which it currently does. At the very least, get rid of the "but also open to" thing.
You need an additional blank line between those two paragraphs and I'd suggest running your entire profile through a more robust spell/grammar program than you will find here or on your phone and then also reading it out loud. You've got some clunky sentence structure here and elsewhere. The information about being DDF, etc., does not belong here. It belongs in either Description or in Additional comments.
In Description, nothing you have here makes me want to know more. Plus, it's "discreet." Oh, and the way punctuation works, it's either "describes me best is passionate," or "describes me best: passionate."
But that doesn't matter so much as the nearly complete lack of the kind of information that would interest me. Say something about yourself as a person. It doesn't have to be a ton - a brief mention of some of your vanilla interests would do it - and think of it as your elevator speech.
Fantasies is full of typos, mostly punctuation but also word usage (it's number one fantasy, not "#1 fantasies") It undercuts what is otherwise a strong section.
Additional comments is a big no. What you have there is based on an internet legend and has no place in your profile. It needs to be removed and burned on a fiery pyre for the silliness it is. Instead, put something interesting here that allows you to end on a positive note.
And that's all I have for now. I hope you make some changes and then come back for further review. Good luck.
