You're looking great and Aristotle would be proud of you. IMO you've improved your profile and improved your chances for more Nicholas Cage kinda guys looking to please the luscious and attractive Mrs BigFoot - nice work showing that you're a fun couple with a well written profile.... Let us know if you have more interest in you.
I removed the line that was objected to. It was a play on a very old joke, "What is a perfect set of legs?" The answer, "Feet on one end and pussy on the other." I would have thought more people would have a sense of humor, but I guess not. If removing it will help us connect with a couple, then I can leave it out. What is the point in asking for advice if the advice is not taken?
And I'll make it four in the no column, plus I'm going to add an objection to the perfect dick comment too. Here's why: Given that wording, which reduces people to their genitalia, you'd be better off with a Fleshlight and a big dildo. It's a huge turn off to contemplate being nothing but a pussy (or, for the discriminating, a dick). So, that loses you everyone except the sport fuckers, who just won't care, because that's how they see people too. That's a surprisingly small pond, given what swinging is about.
Is this about your kitty cats? "...feet on one end and a pussy on the other" Triply agree you should drop or change that line.
He likes a perfect set of legs, feet on one end and a pussy on the other.
This line made me vomit in my mouth a little. Please take it out or change it to “a brain on the other.”
Made some changes and added some pictures
Hey to the folks with the beautiful babe on the bike.
Everything that everyone's written doesn't need to be said again - except you haven't heard yet about the perils of “Empty Additional Comments Syndrome.”
Long ago, Aristotle postulated that Nature Abhors a Vacuum and that any void is destine to be immediately filled…life’s always been like that; drink a beer in a mug and the mug fills-up with air as the beer drains out, and cannonball into the Atlantic Ocean and you'll see you don't punch a permanent hole in the water. Thanks to Aristotle's observation, we know that your barren, wordless, "Additional Comments” section is being filled in by the thoughts of others. We humans abhor empty space as well and we're filling in our own commentary about you because you haven't filled in one of your own. You gotta remember Aristotle and own that space - fill it with positive funny things who reflect who you are, or suggest something about what big foot means. I hope this helps - enjoy it all...
Hi and welcome. There's nothing wrong with your age. You're in a fairly large demographic, I promise. Your profile could use some work though, because it was clearly written by the male half and is more businesslike than inviting.
Your photos are probably from last Christmas, which means you need a refresh. Plus your default photo is marred by a bad background and a pose that doesn't really do justice to what looks like a great body.
I love your tagline.
In Looking For, it's a bit like a list got shoved together and told to be a paragraph. It will help if you reword sentences two through five and then put them down in Additional comments, which would have the additional advantage of not ending your profile with the downer of a blank section. Use this section as a place to describe the couples you're looking for and what you want to do with them (I'm talking about making friends, attending house parties or clubs, not specifics of wild monkey sex).
In Description, that third sentence makes no sense and it raises a red flag. There is nothing about being a couple that makes you immune to causing drama and the mere mention of it raises hackles in some of us. After all, have you ever known drama bombs who weren't completely convinced that any drama in their lives was caused by others? So, that one can go. Harleys doesn't have an apostrophe and House Party is not capitalized. And instead of saying that discretion is expected, which is both prescriptive and out of your control, what if you said (comma) so we are discreet?
I love Fantasies and wouldn't change anything, but if you can't use that line about liking to occasionally attend clubs in Additional comments, you can repurpose it for here.
I kind of want to see what happens if you make some changes. If the structure isn't so businesslike, will what I suspect is a lot of personal warmth surface?
I thought the pictures of us on our Harley's would give a little bit of an idea. I made a couple of minor changes.
We see no obvious red flags. However, there are things missing that would likely have us not reach out.
Mainly,its that we don't get a sense for you two other than you like to eat and have sex. What else is there to you? What would we talk about over dinner before we have sex?
As for your ages we think its a limiting factor for all of us as we age. Nothing you can do about it so don't worry about it.
We've been on SLS for about a year and a half and have been in the lifestyle for that long. We have very few people contact us first. It is usually us making the first contact. Many times that is ignored. The current version of the profile is probably the 3rd one. Is it our age or the profile? What could we do to improve our odds of meeting another couple?
